Elisabeth-Abrams.md

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-Elisabeth is a 4 year old. She has a twinsister, who follows Elisabeth everywhere. Elisabeth developed diabetes last summer. A family practicing everyday life with a diabetic child. Elisabeth has difficulty accepting her own condition because twinsister hasn't it.
+Elisabeth is a 4 year old. She has a twin sister, who follows Elisabeth everywhere. Elisabeth was diagnosed diabetes last summer. A family practicing everyday life with a diabetic child. Elisabeth has difficulty accepting her own condition because twin sister hasn't it. 
 
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